This first bit of dialogue with on p. 4. is instructive: Will shows the depth of the chasm between them at the start.
'Okay,' I [Will #1] said.A nifty piece of foreshadowing, if you ask me.
"And bring clothes for any kind of weather," [Henry] said.
"I know all about that," I said.
"I mean it, Will. You never know what it will do when," he said.
By the end of my time with Henry, I would certainly know that, too."
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